My Reflection:
I was learning to write, plan and present a persuasive speech.
My success criteria were:to speak loud and clear
- I have an introduction, conclusion, and three paragraphs each giving a reason to support my main argument
- each of my paragraphs are at least three sentences long
- I have researched and included facts to back up my argument
- I speak loudly and clearly to my audience
I think I didn't achieve my success criteria because I didn't...speak loud enough.
Next time I write or present a speech I will need to work on speak louder.
I think I did well at writing my speech.
My Reflection
I was learning to understand 24 hour time and write the time in numbers (digital) and words.
In this activity I had to tell the time.
I think I achieved this activity because it was easy for me to work out the digital and 24hr time.
My next steps in learning time are to know it with out working out.
My Reflection:
I have been learning to compare a traditional and fractured fairytale.
I found this easy because story's for me are easy to make.
In this activity I had to fracture a fairy tale
My next steps in my writing are to write my own story's.
My Reflection:
I have been learning to find and summarise information in non-fiction texts by skimming and scanning.
In this activity I had to research some fact about china.
I found this easy because my family is from china and the told me some facts about china.
My next steps are to do the same thing but diffrent countrys.
My Reflection:
I have been learning to compare a traditional and fractured fairytale.
I found this easy because the storys are easy to read so it will be easy to do a venn diagram.
In this activity I had to write about the traditional fairy tale and the fractured fairy tales.
My next steps in my writing are to do harder venn diagrams.
WALT link ideas (both implicit and explicit) in the text to give a greater understanding of the story
My Reflection:
I think I acheivd the secsuss criteria because I can explain and understand the terms explicit and implicit in my own words I can find specific explicit information (obvious) in text and determine the implicit (hidden) idea or message.
my next step is to do other secsuss criterias.
WALT use a range of parts of speech to add interest and detail.
My reflection:I acheivd the Success Criteria because I use: 2 similes, three onomatopoeia and one o more examples of personification My next step is to write more intresting 100 word storys.
WALT write an acrostic poem about Matariki I acheived my seccuss criteria because I wrote the acrostic poem in sentences. The first word ofeach sentence starts with a letter from ‘Matariki’I have written about the main features of Matariki I have written about the main features of Matariki My writing makes sense. my next step is to write longer sentences.
My Reflection: It was so easy to write this 100 word STORY.
I think I acheived this secsuss criteria because I put in the 5w1h in.
I think I acheived the other secsuss criteria because I put the ...5...seneses in.
My Reflection: THIS WAS SO EASY! walt compare and measure length and height in diffrent ways. I have achived this seacsus critearia because I have measured my height and arm length and hands meters and centermeters! I can allsow say what shape my arms and height make me...Tall rectangle
MY REFLECTION:I'm happy because I finished it. IALT read independently for sustained periods of time refection I feel happy because I finished it next time I will try to finish it faster.
IALT USE COMMUTITIVE PROPERTY TO SOLVE PROBLEMS.
I found this easy because I learned this last year.
It was so easy that I finished it one day!!!!
my next step is to learn something else.
My Reflection I was learning to use my number knowledge to solve addition problems I found this easy because this is a basic thing to know next time I will ask for more maths stuff
My Reflection:I was learning to make and justify inferences.
I found this easy because this is a easy story next time I will ask for harder work sheets
Welcome to my Year 4 learning blog. This year I am in room 15 this year and my teacher is Miss Massey. I enjoy the blanket game. This year i am looking forward to be good at maths I hope you will enjoy my blog and leave lots of feedback.